That is Great rite... See expressing yourself is great

Good poem but the flow of it is a little off. Other then that I liked it.

5/5

You're young and so your grammar and diction throw me off when reading your poetry. The potential you have shines through this poem to those who would look for it. "the kiss are supposed to be magical and an array of fireworks" the best line in the poem if you'd ask me. It clearly implies an emotion and attaches an image of excitement and happiness. Keep at it.