I Can't Have You

by Hurtingsoul   Jun 15, 2011


I could not touch you.
But I wanted you,
I wanted you...

I miss feeling your touch
Your warmth
Everything
Just everything
Chaotic
Consuming
Messy.

Just you.

All over me
And gone.

Please I beg
I plead
Cry
And shout,

I want you here with me!

Not just your voice,
Not just your smell,
Not just your picture,
Not just a resemblance,

I want!

The authentic
The imperfection
The wrinkles on your face
The stretch marks on your back
The everything.

Please!
Please!

You!
You!

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I wrote this yelling and typing furiously, so excuse me for lack of smooth flow...

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  • 13 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I feel like one word best describes this...raw. You're right, it didn't have the best flow. But it was because of how passionate you were being while writing it. It definitely came through in the poem. Great job!

  • 13 years ago

    by StonedGooberz

    Most poems are about feeling so i guess you writing like you are yelling is oe way to show feeling a woman that wants liike that is amazing,
    Raindrops 4/5