by Hurtingsoul Jun 15, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
I could not touch you. |
by Midnight Sun
I feel like one word best describes this...raw. You're right, it didn't have the best flow. But it was because of how passionate you were being while writing it. It definitely came through in the poem. Great job! |
Most poems are about feeling so i guess you writing like you are yelling is oe way to show feeling a woman that wants liike that is amazing, |