by Lauren Waszkiewicz Jun 15, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
The words flood to my lips, |
by Brittany C
This poem is a nice length. Not to long or to short. It was a good poem. 5/5 |
My critique is that I felt that the poem went on a little too long. On the upside you wrote something really emotional and interesting to read. I am going to vote high for this poem because its such a deep piece and I feel you deserve the recognition. |