Sad face

by jazzi   Jun 16, 2011


As i wake up on the morning
i just cant give a smile

as i walk on the street
my site is on the ground

on my way to house"
on my way to bed"
on my way to sleep",)

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  • 13 years ago

    by jazzi

    Thanks for vote

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    I think this is a very good write. I suffered with depression in my teens and was diagnosed with a personality disorder in adulthood and your poem reflected how I felt during my lowest moments.

    on my way to house"
    on my way to bed"
    on my way to sleep",)"

    The above stanza is very sad and really pulls at my heart strings it describes the daily routine of a depressed person very well

    5/5

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