by Joseph Boadi Jun 16, 2011
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
By my side a smile he forged |
by Jenni
I think this is a well written poem because the emotions are strong and I like the way you worded this. I have to admit that the flow isn't that continuous, but it doesn't effect the poem too much. I think that the feelings and the story you're telling is really relateable. |
by Joseph Boadi
I appreciate the fact that my poems is being visited.but i would be more happier if i had some comments to at least encourage or errors to correct.thank you |
by Joseph Boadi
I appreciate the fact that my poems is being visited.but i would be more happier if i had some comments to at least encourage or errors to correct.thank you |
by Joseph Boadi
I appreciate the fact that my poems is being visited.but i would be more happier if i had some comments to at least encourage or errors to correct.thank you |
by Joseph Boadi
I appreciate the fact that my poems is being visited.but i would be more happier if i had some comments to at least encourage or errors to correct.thank you |