Follow your heart...sometimes it is a test of yourself but it is always true to you.......5/5
12 years ago
by L
First of all I love this poem
I was just aww when I finished reading it. Though I can feel some sort of frustration from this piece perhaps its was just a one sided love.
I think the "i's" need to be capitalize.. and use question marks when its needed to make this poem more appealing.
Here are my suggestions.
Why is it
that I promise myself
not to talk to you again?
but the moment
I get a glimpse of you
I forget all about it.
Why is it
that I pledge to myself
not to message you?
but the moment
I see your name
flashing in my inbox
I forget all about it.
Why is it
that I try to make
myself strong
to not to love you again?
but the moment
I hear your voice
my heart start beating
aloud saying
I LOVE YOU!!!