Complex

by PinkyPrincess   Jun 18, 2011


It can be very difficult to live with...
Someone who criticizes you, attacks you,
questions your every decision and action.
Someone who paints with your mistakes,
and makes you drown in your regrets.
Someone who pushes you when you're falling,
pulls you back and forth like a rubber band.
Someone who makes you feel insignificant,
eats up the last slice of your self-esteem.
Someone who makes you feel like a failure,
and still condemns you when you succeed.
Someone who sees the minor wrong,
and ignores to see all the rights.
Someone who plays with your mind,
and silently shoots you down.
It can be extremely complex
- to live with oneself -

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  • 13 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I Agree! I thought the imagery of the rubberband was very well used and I thought pretty much every line was good & conveyed a lot of emotion! Nice write. :-). 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Freeze Tyler

    I sure did enjoy this poem. I LVOE poems with this sort of style. This almost irony that brings you one way, and then at the last moment tell you something else that changes the whole poem. I do it in my writings, and it is such a please seeing in other places. It's such an under-used style.

    I also enjoyed the imagery a lot. The Rubber band part was nice, and the sees your minor wrongs.. ect. I enjoyed that part, especially since it is very relatable to almost everyone.

    Altogether. Very nice!

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