I sure did enjoy this poem. I LVOE poems with this sort of style. This almost irony that brings you one way, and then at the last moment tell you something else that changes the whole poem. I do it in my writings, and it is such a please seeing in other places. It's such an under-used style.

I also enjoyed the imagery a lot. The Rubber band part was nice, and the sees your minor wrongs.. ect. I enjoyed that part, especially since it is very relatable to almost everyone.

Altogether. Very nice!

I Agree! I thought the imagery of the rubberband was very well used and I thought pretty much every line was good & conveyed a lot of emotion! Nice write. :-). 5/5