Nostalgia

It's funny how conversations with people end up being a bit more poetic than we intend, isn't it? This is the perfect example of that. I think it's short, which is unlike your work, BUT it has so much of that emotion that you carry within each word you write, no matter what poem it is :)

It's like missing the familiarity more than anything, what's usual to you. I understand that completely!

So much said within these short lines.
It was moving.. heartfelt.. enjoyable!
Well done!

Well thanks to you :P

Note: this was a chat with Mohamed, talking about something.. it was not supposed to be a poem, but I thought I went bit poetic there..and wanted to keep what I said..so posted it!

I Love this read ... Really, The sad feeling in this poem is intense and concentrated in the few words you placed here.

It feels like it is a dark nostalgic thought that led you towards a sort of revelation of why are you feeling nostalgic in the first place.

It's more like a missing part
rather than a part that I miss!

These two lines I find really deep ... Loved them :))

There's so much emotion packed into your words here, lots of meaning also. To me it feels like you used to be something with this person but now you're not. You both never used to be happy maybe with each other or literally never happy and always sad in general as individuals, and now you look for what was missing which never allowed the both of you to be happy, or with each other. There's nothing you'd necessarily miss because you were never happy, how can you miss something that makes you sad?

Your words have great meaning in them,
well done.