by Daisy if you do Jun 20, 2011
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
I was standing in the garden |
by Britt
That is such a creepy and eerie dream! Isn't it amazing what our brain comes up with while we are sleeping? This does also sound like something you could be doing, too. I love the story and the outline, you nailed the descriptions so well that I felt I was there right along side you, out on a country farm. |
by Brookexox
I like it....sometimes dreams are scary...but they tell a story. the poem caches your attention, exspecially the way you've rhymed it. Excellent. |