by Ndanileka Jun 20, 2011
category :
Life, society /
other
I could calm down a hostile crowd |
by Silent Girl
Smooth flow :) 5/5 |
by ronel mccarthy
Lovely write .........cool to find a fellow South African on the site ! |
by Ste
I like this. The potential and the accomplishment already are evident. It could do with a polish i feel to settle the rhythm a little. There are some truly excellent allusions in here which i had thought of (despite having many years head start on you). |