I thought this one was very creative. I loved how you it explains your reality and how u want the person u love to convert all the pain & unhappy moments to happy ones. Also loved the line special love glue. Never seen that before in a poem, very clever. 5/5. Great write again!

Beautiful write.

I liked how raw and real this is. Everyone wants things to work out, and even if they don't and we know they won't, we wish for it anyways.

Wonderful work, 5/5

mandy :)