by Jaison Jun 21, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
We made little fights for fun, |
by Asia
That was beautiful. If that poem was about an actual girl she better realize. Lol :) |
by Jaison
Oh aha yeah, thank you very much, I just write what my heart feels inside, so even it becomes confusing it's how I write poetry aha. |
by Jenni
Oh wow.. took me a bit to catch myself again, since this is so touching. Okay I'll start of with form/structure. The rhyme was well chosen, though the flow got interrupted in between, but that's alright. I also liked how your stanzas ended up getting shorter as you came closer to the end, pointed your final message out well ('I am always here for you') |