Comments : Trust Issues

  • 13 years ago

    by hisfirstandlast

    This is really good :) i can totally relate! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    The rhyme wasn't always clear but it didn't do much to the poem and its message. The flow would be better if you kept the same amount of syllables in each verse, but that's fine.
    I think it's a quite good poem. I'm sure quite a few poeple have experienced this before. I liked how the emotional situation changed during the poem: It starts off in love and ends in disappointment/anger.
    All in all i think it's a nice poem, thanks for sharing and keep up writing!