Because I Still Love You

Something many will be able to relate to. Nice write, keep it up. (:

Good job..its a beautiful piece of art!!

I thought every word in this poem was spot on. I liked the contrast between you hate the song, simply because it reminds you of someone you still love that u arent with anymore. The simplicity of this poem is what made it stand out, if it hadn't been this way i doubt it would've had the same emotional impact. I also loved how it was one piece as a whole and how you separated the last line, it really tells us readers your inner emotions. Very well written piece. Nice job. Glad you keep writing. :) 5/5.

Beautiful job! the whole piece is filled with emotion and your words portray it perfectly.

A phase a lot of people will go through and you have given a good idea of what most people feel when they have this happen to them. Your words are simplistic and straight to the point giving a fairly direct message. It's hard losing someone you love and always having that one song that you both listen to. Then you break up and hearing that song breaks you down to tears. You did a good job with the imagery and emotions for this poem.

I didn't pick a favorite line because I really liked the whole poem together as one stanza. I did love how you kept a big space between the last line and second to last line. Gave a big impact to the reader as we find out why you hate this song so much.

In all, I couldn't find one part of this poem that I didn't like. You had all your emotions collected together in a fast moving poem that keeps the reader going on from the first line to the last. I liked the surprise ending and I think you have a really good talent for poetry. Great job and keep writing! :]