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by Alexa Jun 21, 2004 category : Life, society / other
Have you ever wished on a star? Has your wish ever come true? Have you ever chased a rainbow? Did you find your pot of gold? Did you ever follow a pirate map? Did you finally find your treasure? People say I'm foolish Sometimes I feel like it too For some reason it's not right To be the kid in you Even though they'll laugh and stare Probably try to make me cry I'll just sit here where we are Wishing on a star.
by David
The rhythm was right on!! the rhymes were off a little, they can be better. The message was incredible. The message was clear overall Nice poem, I like it.