I really like this one you paint the picture really well with your words 5/5

I like the flow of this poem. The last 5 or 6 lines are epic! Good write. I enjoyed reading it.

Is it my imagination
Thoughts haunting me?
My own creation?
Please set me free

love them for lines amazing writing your very talented

How i understand this, secrets can eat you inside and you really express it love it

Hmmm, this is interesting. :)

I have for you one suggestion, try to write a free verse, I'm sure you will ROCK :)
the sadness wasn't that clear, some expressions were just over-used and cliche :/
the first two lines were eye-catchy!

nevertheless, a good write. keep writing

five!

Great word use i really like this poem u deffinetly get a 5 from me

This is definatly a 5! I love this, your choice of words is amazing. Magnificent!!