Comments : GUIDING LIGHT

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow!!! this is really really cool! It is amazing!! Fantastic job!

  • 13 years ago

    by Kiko

    This is a nice romantic piece.
    It kind of reminds me of an old lullaby:

    Hush, little baby, don't say a word.
    Papa's gonna buy you a mockingbird

    And if that mockingbird won't sing,
    Papa's gonna buy you a diamond ring

    And if that diamond ring turns brass,
    Papa's gonna buy you a looking glass

    And if that looking glass gets broke,
    Papa's gonna buy you a billy goat

    And if that billy goat won't pull,
    Papa's gonna buy you a cart and bull

    And if that cart and bull fall down,
    You'll still be the sweetest little baby in town

  • 13 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The heavenly imagery makes this romantic poem astronomical

    well done

  • 13 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Thank you

  • 13 years ago

    by jen sheridan

    This poem is equally as fabulous. You display a poetic soul and this is quite rare. Well writen once again.

  • 13 years ago

    by Milo

    Lots of emotions, deep abiding love. I love the image, using clear and deep personifications. Thank you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Brix Ambray

    Hope all of you are doing fine.