Am in love with this poem .. I think its the best poem you have ever written .. I felt it all .. every single word spoke to me ..

You had me at the first verse, loving someone without even seeing or hearing them ..

My velvet words
I wish they never reach you wrapped in
Spikes of their greed
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Those words are EPIC !!

If separated it will cut deep
Into thousands of non healing wounds
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OMG !! Speechless

I'll render my heart to you
At the cost of grains of sand
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Sacrifice anything for the one you love <3

And believe that I need nobody but you
When you and I are one
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I love it when someone refers to themeselves and to the one they love as "one"

God bless you ..
5/5 and a nomination

Wow, i love this. great flow, i personally think it would make a great ballad (which is testimony to the birlliant rhythm and structure maintained throughout.) love the repetition of needing noone but her also. very well done.

Must be one of the deeepest..deeepest words read by me since a very good time..yaa not in such a sense..no not such depth of undefinable emotion....amazing

a master piece..
am deeeply touched.