An amazingly penned piece Larry, I love how you portray how love went cold and stagnant not as raging as once it has been ... Its not love that died but it just grew old and cold to no hope of revival ... 5/5 :)

Omg....def. nominated...weelll done..amazing work. AM speechlessss...very deep..

Waw......just waw.. How can such a tiny piece hold so much ..I don't even know how to say it..so much emotions...so much melancholy..what you've done here...is amazing..defently going to my favorites...<3

Is this about your daughter getting her first period? Apologies if it isn't.

Some nice writing.

One of my favorites ever written by you, Sir Larry :)

well-done!

This is the first I have read of yours, but won't be the last. Excellent wording