WELL DONE !!!! I love it!!

this line "You are like a precious stone
Tangling from a velvet sky"

is just beautiful.....and so the battle begins!!lol!

Beautiful poem girl, i liked a lot how ur description was so clear and beautiful , u really described ur lover very well,and the rhyme was also so good, well done dear :)

Well you penned an image, I personally admire. I love the moon when its red really :D ... And I could never write about it because it couldn't fulfill my admiration to this beautiful sight .... Yours perfectly did though :D

Bravo !

That's what I call a poem outstanding your an amazing writer x

Just like rose petals scattered on a bed

i like the last line... its good. makes me to read once again this poem. so short but to the point.. straight writing. well done in this piece

Very well writen, mistery always makes a poem beautiful :)

Beautiful!