Although it may be emotion 'trash/venting' as you put it, personally I like reading things that make you 'feel' deep whats been written. As opposed to something thats 'composed' or set up.

Either way, its poetry..in fact a true poetry from deep within an emotional soul..I liked it
and I can also understand the frustration behind it...take care.

I think you have explaind your feelings very clear, it dark way its very beautiful. You may not think so but it it. At least i know im not alone..

I know you said no comments are necessary, but I thought this really reflected your inner emotions and it feels great to write out your frustrations and make yourself feel better, I really hope it worked, and I know that your burden will be lifted in the future!!! So, it may be terrible now, but eventually wounds will heal and time will pass and you will have it lifted. Very nice work for just trash/venting. Poetry is something that expresses our inner feelings and emotions so I do consider this poetry, no need to change things like you said, but it was poetic. H

Sorry for your pain. But this actually was well written for just a vent.

Im not sure which i liked better, the poem or the writers note!

I act the part. I play the games
I pretend like I am still the same;

I do know i love these two lines the most - its like your writing about me, we are so similar, oh and i do realise i have already commented on this one but every time i re-read a poem i always pick up on something i never knew was there before.

Personally this is still a good read for me. Well done.