This is very good I enjoyed reading it. :)

I agree with the people that commented before me.
This poem may be short, yet it portrays a vivid image and the emotions seem really strong. I like the fact that it flows so well because that underlines the context. Your choice of words definitely fit and I think that this is a well penned poem.

A very short and enjoyable. It brought back memories of a time in my life. Absolutely beautifully penned

Connie