Comments : Missunderstood

  • 13 years ago

    by Fulcrous

    Well done.
    Despite the fact that it says "I no longer want you / because reality I still do," I get the feeling that you, as the narrator, really love this person but your words (as mentioned above) are taken literally and inevitably misunderstood.
    Well done with the setting and atmosphere and well done with the title.

  • 13 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    Thanks..i appreciate it.

  • 13 years ago

    by catherin

    Ohh..i really liked the poem actually i could relate it ..good work..

  • 13 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Guys do pretend and dont know the worth of words, like "I love you" and such. Great poem, keep writting, and I'll keep reading

    From the PoetryKnight

  • 13 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Good poem you cant fault nothing from the heart

  • 13 years ago

    by Captain Lonesome

    IM SORRY that you had to feel these feeling, but most do. If it was the first time it probably wont be the last. Just dont let it get the best of you, learn from it, good luck and God bless! :)

  • 13 years ago

    by LOS

    Nice work !