I love how these blossoms are moved by nature and though at first are not carried by your touch- being to be made new and take away past regrets and sins that are tying you.

I didn't like the line "the sky fills pink"- since you already have the color displayed in the title, I would have made a new description having to do with the sky. But I like how you brought the sky into this, as if the cherry blossoms come from there, patving their home to earth to heal and bond nature.

Beautiful yet simple.
God bless!