You

by Dr sarat sonowal   Jun 27, 2011


I was like an open book
Until the writer came and wrote me

I was like a virgin
Until the painter came and drew me

I was like a candle
Until the darkness came
and surrounded me

I was like an ivory tower
Until the the ship came
and broke me

I was what i am
Until you came
and stole me

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  • 13 years ago

    by Dr sarat sonowal

    Thank you my friend....I have read your works and its beautiful

  • 13 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    "I was like an open book
    Until the writer came and wrote me"

    Did you mean to say "empty notebook"

    "I was like a virgin
    Until the painter came and drew me"

    Love the beauty in the analogy

    "I was like a candle
    Until the darkness came
    and surrounded me"

    Touching and beautifully expressed

    I was like an ivory tower
    Until the the ship came
    and broke me

    Amazing choice for "ivory tower" to show resilience/toughness

    I was what i am
    Until you came
    and stole me

    Love the flow of the whole poem leading to this lovely ending. Great write my friend. 5/5