"I was like an open book
Until the writer came and wrote me"

Did you mean to say "empty notebook"

"I was like a virgin
Until the painter came and drew me"

Love the beauty in the analogy

"I was like a candle
Until the darkness came
and surrounded me"

Touching and beautifully expressed

I was like an ivory tower
Until the the ship came
and broke me

Amazing choice for "ivory tower" to show resilience/toughness

I was what i am
Until you came
and stole me

Love the flow of the whole poem leading to this lovely ending. Great write my friend. 5/5

Thank you my friend....I have read your works and its beautiful