Comments : Love Melody

  • 13 years ago

    by Ramblings of an ageing Kid

    I like the poem ... It has been a while since your last love poem

    I am so in love with this one really :)))

  • 13 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    OMG!!!!!.....that is beautiful....

    "You raise me so high and above
    Until breathing becomes so tough
    This is the effect of falling in love"

    That just made me melt!!!! just fantastic :-))

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    O MY GOD!
    this is Amazing...
    The title was so sweet, then the joyful tone in your words was very very very cute, nd i kept smilling with every new stanza..its very interesting and innocent..

    give me this sense of a fresh love that makes u thrilled excited, over the clouds!
    the love for someone, that you sound like appreciated badly.

    However ofcourse I have a favorite stanza, which is this one:

    When you sing
    My breath stops for a while
    You just change my lifestyle
    And unconsciously I start to smile

    ^^
    I RELATTEEE MHM :P

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Wat a lovely work once agn ,,,5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Boy

    When you sing
    i feel i am so close to happiness
    i feel the fragrance of your breaths
    -------------------------------------333
    good poem.... its all about love.. pure.. i adore it.

  • 13 years ago

    by nealy

    I love this one