You have such an amazing ability to capture in sound, rhythym, and lyric the impossible.
What a remarkable poem, I wished that I had seen it sooner. I am hoping it is still eligible for nomination if it is.

I will be back to further indulge myself into this piece and really sink my mind in it.

Even after I somehow have a clue of what your poems are about, I still have a hard time understanding them. I mean I sort of have a clue but it's hard to put them in words.

But I do enjoy reading them, it makes me think.

Amazing vivid descriptive piece. I felt this was creative, how you turn and twist your words and how you make them fit in the lines is so amazing. the rhyming was also good and was put where really necessary, not forced.