by Jenni
Though it's been a while ever since you've written something: this is great! The message is presented very well, direct and clear, i definately agree on it ;) You expressed the emotions good. I'm glad you picked up writing again! |
by Meme
Well the poem is simply amazing, alot of people don't really understand the concept that love is ageless, well to be honest, I would never fall for a younger man, but he can be a million years older that wont be a problem for me :) |
Age seems to be such a big deal to some, but I think you have perfectly said how the heart seems to ignore the difference. In my opinion go with what feels right, age is but a number. Well said indeed |
by average thoughts
Seems like my lv lyf..cnt tel u,so close to my hrt....excellent..5/5..and as u said ,u hv strtd agn..so plz dnt stop..keep on writin,sch gud poems.. |
by kasandra
Heyy im kasandra and i just started writing again i havent wrote since i was nine and i have never heard such a good poem before well done i wish i could write as good as u anyways i enjoyed ur poem and i hope u get a chance to read mine |
by Ben Pickard
Picked at random, Tony and pleased I did. I really can relate to this poem as I'm sure so many can. I love the line that ends "....,turn me into us". Well done. |