Comments : How could you

  • 13 years ago

    by ibelievedhim

    Paige, I really hope this isn't true. If it is, you know I'm here to talk to. Reading this hurts me, because I care about you. I hope you'll be alright.

    The poem has a great rhyme scheme and so much emotion in this one. So much hurt/pain and even if you didn't mean it, anger is in here too. 5/5 wonderful.