This was so heartbreaking, but every line had such an emotional impact and was wrote brilliantly. Loved it. :-).

I love this poem. The opening stanza was excellent, and it built towards the end.

I enjoyed how you took me through a sad, and poetic story of this relationship. I liked how you really explained things to the reader. Nice vocabulary!

It moved me, awesome write! 5/5

mandy :)