I know you had a hard time for this because of the word restriction (or too many words! lol) and what not, but I think you did this with ease. This is beautiful poetry, I absolutely love the creativity.

The end of the first stanza, I read it a few times, should "awaken" be "awakened" ??

This is so unique and creative, I love where you went with this and seriously have never seen anything like it. I've nominated it ;) Hope ya don't mind! LOL

I liked this poem. Nicely written. The wording was great. The flow was good. It is also a good length, not to long or to short. Nicely done :)

5/5