This was such a spirited piece- with beautiful rhyme and easy flow to read along with. I love how you incorporate the seasons and that even in the chill and heat, there is always something to smile about.

Brought a smile to my faces....truly written with grace.
God bless your friendship!

~MaryAnne

I love the repetition of "Remember Me" and the flow of the yearly Seasons, It is some what like a Eulogy, but of course the admonition is for a Living Being, Precious the words still. Peace and Blessings

Kay,

What a lovely dedication to Anna, I have to agree with MaryAnne it was spirited and I think that's what I enjoyed most about it. You showed your friendship in an elegant manner, I liked how you related the seasons to certain aspects of her, especially the reference to Winter and the heart, it portrayed that even in hard times she still manages to 'sing.' A lovely flow, am not one for rhyme usually as you can probably tell from my poetry but this was really smooth and catchy so to say and I quite enjoyed the repetition of 'remember me.' I am sure Anna would love this.

-Mel.

This was an enjoyable write. I liked it from start to end and have no critique to offer you as I think the poem is perfect the way it is.

5/5

I sure will remenber this poem, well writen ;)

Not normally a fan of rhyme this is one of the exceptions which break the rule. Very enjoyable and warm poem. Great read out aloud. Masterful.