Comments : Enlightened Poetess

  • 13 years ago

    by Sunshine

    That was verysweet, and too kind to believe it's about me, I did not expect that really!
    An amazing poem, I was in LOVE with the rhyming scheme, the word choice, and the expressions.
    You always always have the right words to say for me, even when people start taking you wrong...i guess we give them something to gossip about :P

    however ;let me tell u my favorite 2 lines:
    I seek shelter from the storm
    and dare not steal its thunder.

    ^^^
    inspiriingggggggg..........loved them before I knew it was about me..
    such a ffruiit!

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Meme

    Perhaps I am often misunderstood
    ^^
    I suffer from that aloooot .. So I can honestly relate Michael ..

    So sweet and sincere ..

    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A heart warming read that speaks the truth. Liked the rhyme scheme and the smoothness of this write..very nice :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Kiko

    I really enjoyed this, Michael. It is a very touching tribute to a wonderfully gifted poetess.

    Nicely penned!

  • 13 years ago

    by Edward D Zurovec

    Definately a gift from the Creator to write words such as these;

    "I seek shelter from the Storm,
    and dare not steal its Thunder."

    Beautiful Mikey, just Beautiful!

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Mikkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkke
    i feel jealoussssssssssss
    !!!!!! bagggggggggh :P

    this was endlessly well-written and I LOVED some lines like never before.....Nana is such a wondeful person, she deserves that! :)

    great poetry and great talent, u have a veeeeeeeeery big heart...:):):)