Love's Remedy.

by Poet on the Piano   Jul 1, 2011


I need to know
Anything
About being
With you.
Will you listen now?

.

Will you save me
Stay with me
Save the farewells
Use hope to soar
Sleep above dark
Hold together life
Reach my depth
Tie lost pieces
Be by my side
Give positivity
Change perspectives
Tackle family wars
Embrace moving on
Build forgotten time
Create a shelter of peace?

.

Will you
Be mine?

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  • 13 years ago

    by Decayed

    I like the tenderness flowing within these verses..
    so heart aching and enticing to read.
    great write
    5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Ingrid

    MaryAnne,

    I like how you have written this and I can understand how a girl could need a boy to be all that.

    In the course of my life I have learned something and I want to share it with you. If you want a man to love you and to be with you forever than make sure you first love yourself and have a fulfilled life. Men love to be with a woman who has made a life for herself with a carreer, hobbies, friends and that they are happy all by themself first and want him to be A PART of all that. So many women make the mistake of clinging to a man and make him the centre of their universe..most men don't like that, it makes them feel like suffocating and they fear the responisblility and the expectations that lie underneath it all.

    Make him feel you like having him around, but not so that you cannot do without him;)

    I know you are still so very young, but I hope you will never forget these words, because they are really true and I mean well with you:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid