I liked how never forgot this person very good keep it up

I can so relate to that

I LOVED THIS POEM!!!!! great job. very personal for being completely made up lol good one.

I'm speechless... the last stanza blew me away. It's definitely the best ending to the poem and my favorite stanza. I liked the story behind this poem... the idea that love is given but can be stopped at times... Very relatable as well. Great job hon!

Very well expressed, especially these last lines:
We were one of the same device
Now we've become like fire and ice