I wish you could see what i see

by cristal   Jul 4, 2011


I wish I knew another language
That could explain to you how I feel
Cause no word or phrase I've ever heard
Could start to describe a love so real

If it takes every breath
I'll still say it to you
If it takes all my life
I'll still prove that its true

Ill love you from this life
Right through to the next
With every last breath
And every beat in my chest

Together we can tackle
Anything that life throws
And I'm here by your side
Till the end of the road

There's no one on earth
That's more perfect for me
I'd go to the end of the world
For you to see what i see

Your caring and loving
With such a big heart
Funny and honest
Generous and smart

Nothing is worth
Not having you in my life
There's thing i want more
Than to be your wife

And if i ever woke up
And all this was a dream
I'd go to sleep forever
To have you back again

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  • 11 years ago

    by Sidh Swabhav

    Nice longing, very loving.

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    The first stanza was kind of good. :) if only you put the right punctuation and such stuff, it would look much better!

  • 13 years ago

    by cristal

    Thanks everyone i will post some more of my poems and of course you can show it to your boyfriend hun :) glad yous liked it :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    I'm amazed. This is a really heartfelt poem. The emotions you expressed are so pure and honest. Whoever this poem is about will definately like it and will be glad to see that he makes you happy like that! :) Flow and rhyme were great too! Keep it up

  • 13 years ago

    by Eleanor

    Love the poem! Really portrays love and the things you do for it.
    A nice easy flow to the poem too.

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