Love the poem! Really portrays love and the things you do for it.
A nice easy flow to the poem too.

I'm amazed. This is a really heartfelt poem. The emotions you expressed are so pure and honest. Whoever this poem is about will definately like it and will be glad to see that he makes you happy like that! :) Flow and rhyme were great too! Keep it up

Thanks everyone i will post some more of my poems and of course you can show it to your boyfriend hun :) glad yous liked it :)

The first stanza was kind of good. :) if only you put the right punctuation and such stuff, it would look much better!

Nice longing, very loving.