Nice song!
I used to song write ages ago and I found the structure the hardest thing to follow but I really like the structure you created.
5/5

Wow, this is really good! thats a really great job! definately a 5

Wow, this is really good! thats a really great job! definately a 5

This reminds me how I acted towards my first girlfriend when I was younger. Although I dont think we had any real future...I wish I wasn't such a D i c k. good poem

What an amazing song I like it!

5/5