My father= my cuts

by NOTWORTHLIVING   Jul 5, 2011


Death is the only friend i have
why do i not feel comfort when shes around
my dad ha.......... my dad doesnt even care
I CAN'T STAND HIM!!!!!!!! hes nothing to me
he screams an breathes hate
he's got in to the point that i feel beatin down
now he went an knocked momma down
i begin to cry an wonder why
is tht a black teenage male must see this
i pick up my an try to end it
i wake up few months later veins sewed shut
heart messed up and dad is sitting there
callin me a screw up n ot worth it...............
to think thats my dad well now you know
why i'm always sad

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  • 13 years ago

    by NOTWORTHLIVING

    I hvnt had so mny people compliment my work thnk u sincerly alister

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    This is a really emotional and heartfelt write, it touched me. If you're going through this i only wish you the best and hope things will turn out good again, you surely deserve it. I know it's easy for me to say not to give up since i'm not in your situation but please don't. Keep up writing.

  • 13 years ago

    by Eleanor

    That's really really intense! I'm sorry that your dad treats you that way. As mad as it sounds, every negative that happens can always be turned into a positive. Some of us opt out and choose the easy path, but some go out and explore every part of life and embrace it.
    Try and embrace life, and acceptance is the key to moving on.
    Things wont always be like that for you, and one day you can start your own family and show how a real dad is supposed to be. - Learn from his mistakes!

  • 13 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    Sounds like my father! Nicely written I can feel your deep and intense feelings and I like the way you have constructed this poem! Well Done Justin!

  • 13 years ago

    by BlueJay

    This is sad, yet interesting

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