Her Broken Reflection

This is by far my favorite piece of yours so far.
'She stands at the mirror make up melting off her face'
^^
Great first line, and so powerful.

'She gave him all her heart plus body and soul,
Why doesnt he realise the innocence he's stole?'
^^^
Man, that line is so relatable.

,he got back with his ex about three days later,'
^man, that line hit home for me.

The last line was a great closing.
I often find myself staring in the mirror asking myself questions, hoping for the answers I know I'll never have.

Truly my favorite piece of yours!

This is by far my favorite piece of yours so far.
'She stands at the mirror make up melting off her face'
^^
Great first line, and so powerful.

'She gave him all her heart plus body and soul,
Why doesnt he realise the innocence he's stole?'
^^^
Man, that line is so relatable.

,he got back with his ex about three days later,'
^man, that line hit home for me.

The last line was a great closing.
I often find myself staring in the mirror asking myself questions, hoping for the answers I know I'll never have.

Truly my favorite piece of yours!

I love this i can realli relate to it :/ :)

Indeed it's a scar that is hard to mend... but I hope sooner she'll find peace and happiness coz that's what every human being deserves. You did a good job in writing this great piece. God bless you!

This poem is emotional and well wirtten. Like you said on mine (Eighty reasons) its easy to picture the girl. It sent shivers down my spine. Struck a cord with this one. Love it 5/5