I liked this poem a lot, especially how you build it up starting at the mirror, describing what can be seen, how it got there and coming back to the mirror. That was great. I also liked flow and rhyme. I enjoyed reading this piece of yours though it's quite sad. Something nobody deserves to go through, yet it still happens. Keep it up

Ilove this poem and ican relate to this

Your words brought to life this weary girl with the broken heart. I could feel her pain and see her image as black tears of mascara stained her face

Is soo good.. I like the phrase..
"he left her alone, used shattered torn and broken
she hasnt felt heart ach in years the feelings are now awoken"
The words r so perfectly used.

Very nice and so real ya girls get so much pain when some one left them like this
so nice bravo i like it

Very deep, it makes us think how much love is a big deal, its makes us think about trust and the choices we make in life very good 5/5

This poem is emotional and well wirtten. Like you said on mine (Eighty reasons) its easy to picture the girl. It sent shivers down my spine. Struck a cord with this one. Love it 5/5

Indeed it's a scar that is hard to mend... but I hope sooner she'll find peace and happiness coz that's what every human being deserves. You did a good job in writing this great piece. God bless you!

I love this i can realli relate to it :/ :)

This is by far my favorite piece of yours so far.
'She stands at the mirror make up melting off her face'
^^
Great first line, and so powerful.

'She gave him all her heart plus body and soul,
Why doesnt he realise the innocence he's stole?'
^^^
Man, that line is so relatable.

,he got back with his ex about three days later,'
^man, that line hit home for me.

The last line was a great closing.
I often find myself staring in the mirror asking myself questions, hoping for the answers I know I'll never have.

Truly my favorite piece of yours!

This is by far my favorite piece of yours so far.
'She stands at the mirror make up melting off her face'
^^
Great first line, and so powerful.

'She gave him all her heart plus body and soul,
Why doesnt he realise the innocence he's stole?'
^^^
Man, that line is so relatable.

,he got back with his ex about three days later,'
^man, that line hit home for me.

The last line was a great closing.
I often find myself staring in the mirror asking myself questions, hoping for the answers I know I'll never have.

Truly my favorite piece of yours!