I looooved this poem, especially your first set in the string. Thought this accompanied the picture PERFECTLY! Love, love, love! So creative!

Kay,

I was extremely impressed by this when I read it. Not only did you nail the task of creating a string Haiku but you described the picture beautifully and your words were a poet version of this Dali painting. You mentioned the many important elements that were symbolic in his painting, the flesh, the virgin, pomegranate, Tigers, and I also thought the insertion of 'Pachyderm' was quite clever, not something I would of thought of and that is why I adored it.

I agree with Britt, this was very creative and I was fond of the first stanza of the string in particular. Though I also really enjoyed the ending, It was a little more simplistic than the first three and it wrapped the entire poem nicely.

The concept and symbolism through this is lovely.
-Mel.

What a wonderful painting made with the brush of words. It was vivid and imaginative. What a beautiful painter you are :-)

I don't know the picture but i now see it in my mind's eye!