With All My Heart

by Fulcrous   Jul 6, 2011


The end is nigh,
It's time to say goodbye.
I'm mad with regret,
Something I can't forget,
I sincerely told you,
That "I love you."

Your smile, so beautiful, fades.
You feel betrayed.
The person you trust,
Perhaps he's possessed with lust.

The distance between
Never closes.
You're so close,
Yet so far away.
Is this the way we truly are?

The months fly by,
With no reply.
So now I take one last stand,
And write in the sand,
"It is not lust
I really did love you
With all my heart."

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This came out rather spontaneously. It wasn't carefully thought over like my debut poem. But oddly I feel as if it captures the love one feels: as a friend becomes one you love, but you get rejected and never talk to one another again because it feels so awkward. And so in it's rough and raw state, I can only hope that you all sympathize to this and let go of that burden encasing your hearts.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Angel

    Wow this is really good i really really like it :)

  • 13 years ago

    by LOvEiSNotFoREvER

    Is so full of emotions
    loved the flow ..and how beautiful it is even if is not tought out..lover it! :)
    10/10

  • 13 years ago

    by Jenni

    I did not always get the rhyme but it did not effect the poem, it somewhat fit to the content that it was not completly continious. I think that this is actually a quite good piece for coming out rather spontaneously. I was lucky enough not to get into that situation just yet but the way you described the emotion one feels going through this were imaginable.

  • 13 years ago

    by Fulcrous

    Thanks once again. This was a spur of the moment thing without much thought. I'm glad you like it.

  • 13 years ago

    by catherin

    Gerat work ..you deserve a pat on the back good job..

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