A very sad poem that is also very deep. I felt engrossed in the poem from start to end and really enjoyed the read. This poem really touched my heart and I just hope it is made up and not true.

5/5 excellent

This poem is filled with emotions, sad yet so pure. The imagery you set with the detailed description gave me, as the reader, the possibility to follow your thoughts and imagine what you told really well. I liked the fact that you repeated two stanzas, showed their importance. The flow nice too, it was a pleasure reading this poem.