by Heather Jul 8, 2011
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
It's always dark inside this room called my heart. |
I like you subject here. The heart, wow the endless pieces that will continue to be writen on the subject. Hearts are like snowflakes in that, there are no two the same. Beautiful, yet fragile while being incredibly durable as well. You have summed it all up pretty well in this piece. I enjoyed the opportunity to review your work. |
Again a poem that is true and strong i love it, keep it up! |
This was a great poem heather keep up the great work.. please rate and comment my poems please thank you. |
by Liliana
Good job its clear that you what a truly broken heart is. Keep Going :) |
by Heather
Thank you so much! :) |