Comments : With my whole

  • 13 years ago

    by Dark Secrets

    This is sooooo beautiful!!! I love words, the flow, the way you pictured love... the whole poem is WOW!!! You deserve the 5 :)

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    I like this. When we get hung up on a person it's like their smell, their smile, their everything makes us a better person even if we don't need to be better. I long for such a person lol then again don't we all?

    Take care, Em

    • 8 years ago

      by The Po whet

      It's true Em it is always a beautiful feeling to be so much in love with someone, and it's a fairytale of such when you're loved in return with the same magnitude of affection. There's always someone out there that'll give you their all, it's only hard to know which one, that's why we end up kissing a thousand frogs before finally meeting them. Thanks for the comment Em

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Sure thing and you don't have to tell me twice about kissing frogs as I've kissed a few toads in my time haha

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww, this is absolutely sweet. I love this. I just wish you have consistently used thee instead of you throughout the poem...I love Old English very much!!!

    • 7 years ago

      by The Po whet

      Thanks so much for your comment Mossgirl19,I also adore old english,and i'm considering your idea very much.Thanks again.

    • 2 years ago

      by The Po whet

      @mossgirl19 ,your wish is finally granted,how about you do a second reading?