I really like this poem thw flow and words are very well written and the message is clear . very god write hev's

This is a really good piece! I loved each and every bit of it. The repetition was great and you interrupted it at the exact right time: Realising that the loved one is not coming back. This poem may be short yet it reached an unbelievable depth. Also it is very emotional. Keep it up!

Thank you so much! =)