Admire Me.

by Poet on the Piano   Jul 9, 2011


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I am held,
fascinated,
by something greater
than their bright luster.

There is a personal
intelligence to them,
as if they have weighed
my own heartbreaks.

I watch them filter
moonlight through,
composing octaves
and abstract notes
that leave me hungry
for more nearness.

Their purity stirs inside,
they wouldn't leave
even if the sun shot by-
unable to miss
a note of loving.

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  • 13 years ago

    by PoetryKnight

    Awsome poem, first i saw a dimond, then it led into a composition of my love, aka music. it then led me to salt, aka it is pure, and i eat it on all my food, lol.

    But i love how everything fit into place in this magnificent masterpiece of elegent compilation of words that we call a WICKED AWSOME POEM! lol.

    As i say to all poets I love reading there work, keep writting, and I'll keep reading, and ty for the comment on my heart broken poem, this poem is a 5/5 indeed. and what part of indiana are you from. I was from Fort Wayne, till i joined the army, now i am up in Fort Lewis Washington, Ight, keep in touch, and ty for welcoming me.

    From the PoetryKnight
    AKA AJ Goodpaster

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